A few thoughts:
Pretty good! Id say this is right middle of the line for your 2022 discography. I like the main melody and it does a really good job at setting up this story like structure, the offdrops especially
A few complaints though:
1: The drums. Lots of weird choices here, specifically the snare, which is almost as weak as my social life, and the buildup percs being mixed in really weak.
2: idk if the ending is highpassed on purpose but yeah uhh its a lil weird as is
3: the drops can be really empty at times, especially in the second drop, and thats i think due to just how thin and subby the bass is. I think a neurofunk bass would have made this a lot better tbh
Anyhow thats all for my rambles. Really cool song overall, good luck on nguac!!